Monthly Archives: April 2014

DwtW – Two New Chapters

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Hey kids!

Sorry it’s been awhile since any updates. The editing that I was doing up through chapter 13 was mostly just language-type stuff – cleaning up the sound of things so it didn’t sound so old-fashioned, if you know what I mean. Needless to say, I’m basically caught up in that department and now I’m back to actually re-writing and developing the plot. Hence, progress is a bit slower.

Anyway, here are two new chapters. And finally, a bit of action, for those of you who were getting bored…

DWTW – Through Chapter 14

DwtW – Through Part Two

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Sorry for not posting any updates last week…I thought that the end of Part Two would be a nice, clean break and I hadn’t quite finished working through Chapter 12.

So, Part Two…it doesn’t have a lot of action, so if you get bored easily, you could just skip ahead to Chapter 11, ha. That being said, I enjoyed writing it, especially the process of adults remembering (or in this case, learning for the first time) what it means to be a child – how big the world can be, and how frightening it is when the people that we think of as invincible suddenly aren’t.

It’s also very entertaining to write about Lieb.

Anyway, as a side note, please feel free to point out any grammatical errors. I tend to speed-read, and this is often disastrous when it comes to editing.

Read on.

DWTW – Through Part Two

DwtW – All of Part One

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As promised….also, I added cover art! Look how cool I am. The coloring needs some help – I was doing it freehand and it shows. I’d like to recolor it with my tablet at some point.

You will also notice a complete table of contents but obviously not all of the chapters are finished or even named properly. I’ll be filling them in as I go.

Thanks for the feedback so far. It tickles me to think that people are actually taking the time to read this. Best comment I’ve gotten so far was from my dad, who said that now he wanted to know what was going to happen to Noa and “whats her name”. Ha. (For the record, Zefyr’s name is pronounced “Ze-feer”. I know that typical variations of that word are pronounced “Zeffer”, but hey, this is my story. If you really want to think of her as “Zeffer” though, I can handle it.)

DWTW – Through Chapter 8